Your Man-To-Be Comments

Great Piece...AWESOME LYRICALS, Esther>>>And the swagger? That's cuz YOU HAVE Confidence.AND WELL YOU SHOULD, BASED ON YOUR GIFT OF THE 'SILENT WORD''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

You're right (t'was 'And then I woke up') , so I've changed it. Thanks for the constructive criticism - always welcome! Est: ]

Sounds like a fun time, but I have to confess I am not really fond of the last line... 'and then I woke up' - a little too flat/predictable? -chuck

Wow Esther, your inner child (or perhaps inner adolescent) is certainly to the fore in this imaginative dream written in your recognizable style with abandon and ebulience. Wonderful penning. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

E very S pecial T eacher H as E motional R eads Thankyou for the emotion in so many of your writes, love duncan XXX

Sounds a wonderful dream to me Esther! How come you are so lucky! Beats a bar of chocolate any day! Loved it. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

You have the ability to engage the reader, draw them it, tease and amuse. A wonderfully crafted piece, the energy flows out of this Esther. Only in dreams are we truly free...Justine

It's 'More Than Love'... more like an obsession (with musicians) ! You rock, Esther! ! Brian

Way to go, way to dream, girl! ! ! ! - As a piece this is vivid, exciting, entrancing, exhilterating and liberating; with superb flow. t x