Sunday, November 18, 2012

Your Majesty Comments

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Your majesty, if you will
I realize that I am not worthy
Of licking the slime from your shoes
But I would that I could
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Gwenevere Cornwell
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Bri Edwards 22 November 2012

i just posted a new poem about The King......His Royal Highness: TKTWBH. hope everyone likes it; well not everyone since not everyone has the refinement to enjoy it............like Gwenevere and I have. and The King really did tell me most of the stories about Him that are in my poem. It should be listed under LONG in my poem list.

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Bri Edwards 21 November 2012

i love TKTWBH....well at least i enjoy his humor a lot. i have submitted one medium-sized poem about His Majesty, entitled I Doubt You King....something like that. i have a much larger one i have yet to submit as it is awaiting typing. i read the above some time ago and may have sent you a message about it. i know i have not told you though that i believe the first stanza does not make much sense to me when compared to what comes after it. ? ? ? i like this a lot more than the love/death/tears types of poems. not that those kind aren't well-written.

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Kelvin Owusu 19 November 2012

great job gwen keep up the excellent work

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