Friday, September 8, 2017

Your Lullaby Comments

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I promised to put ya to sleep..,
But i seem to have ran out of words i'd deem sweet..
sweet like the cupcakes you always eat, yet so gentle and warm..
warm like does to your hands a cup of tea...
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Tshielo Nature Otsogile
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Rati Rap 07 September 2018

Beautifully articulated

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Chinedu Dike 20 June 2018

Beautiful love poem, well articulated and nicely penned from the heart. Thanks for sharing Tshielo.

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Sandra Erickson 08 September 2017

Just lovely. So glad I stopped by to read.

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Tshielo Nature Otsogile 08 September 2017

thank you

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Jazib Kamalvi 08 September 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Tshielo. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Gajanan Mishra 08 September 2017

sweet dream, butterflies and benevolent queen.

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Tshielo Nature Otsogile

Tshielo Nature Otsogile

Francistown, Botswana
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