Sunday, April 16, 2017

Your Lovely Face Geography Comments

Rating: 4.9

Every morning
Front of me
Rise
Two bright suns;
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Farzad Jahanbani
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Dr Antony Theodore 18 November 2018

But below of these suns, plain and mountain range There is confluence of couple presence For you and me; Your Lips.....love is flowing like a river between these two mountains of your lively imagination of love...........tha nk u dear poet. tony

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Farzad Jahanbani 18 November 2018

Thanks; my good friend!

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Chinedu Dike 12 March 2018

Work of an active imagination, well articulated and nicely penned from the heart with conviction. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing Farzad and do remain enriched.

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Jazib Kamalvi 16 April 2017

Fine similes with nice metaphors. Thanks

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Farzad Jahanbani 17 April 2017

your look is nice, thanks

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Unwritten Soul 16 April 2017

Interesting idea, it so natural comparison you made here :)

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Farzad Jahanbani 17 April 2017

Thankful, my good friend

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 April 2017

Both sides! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Farzad Jahanbani 16 April 2017

So thanks for your time and attention

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Farzad Jahanbani

Farzad Jahanbani

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