Sunday, December 3, 2006

Your Love Was True! ! Comments

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You told me that your love was true
But then you broke my heart in two

To you it's always been a big game
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Sharma Shalini
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Mahfooz Ali 14 March 2007

Very good and nicely expressed poem Shalini. Keep it up.

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Melvina Germain 03 December 2006

You paint a sad picture in this couplet, good poem.--Melvina--

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