I want to be close to you like Mercury to see your full glow
and brightness of your intimacy
I see you like a Venus because of your unsurpassed beauty
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The amazing glory of Love is aptly captured in the poem. Your employment of appropriate similes to drive home your conviction is poetically remarkable. Thanks for sharing Herbert.
I like how you describe the love using the pkanets! Very well written!
A magnetic kind of force! ! ! With the muse of sweet love. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Lovely write like the rainbow sucks all pains. Thanks for sharing +10.
Poem filled with love, , , , love that every person in the world would wish for. Thank you for sharing.
Very interesting poem. I can feel the love while reading this.
Beautifully and elegantly written love poem. The use of planetary bodies to adopt metaphoric piece of lines is indeed poetically remarkable. A lovely poem insightfully penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. ➕10
I see you like a Venus because of your unsurpassed beauty, , my best line in the poem, & i lov all ur poems Rose Gardner
Very entertaining and original love poem and so beautifully expressed, a gem!
No one has ever thought of the way you described and compared love very different. Mabuhay
Interesting concept, comparing love to planets. I never would have thought of that. Enjoyed reading it.
Beautiful poem of love. Most chrishing lyrics. " I see you like a Venus ".. Venus Anadyomene? 5 *s