Wednesday, September 11, 2013

Your Love Is Like The Planets In The Universe Comments

Rating: 4.4

I want to be close to you like Mercury to see your full glow
and brightness of your intimacy

I see you like a Venus because of your unsurpassed beauty
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Captain Herbert Poetry
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Beautiful poem of love. Most chrishing lyrics. " I see you like a Venus ".. Venus Anadyomene? 5 *s

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Chinedu Dike 11 February 2017

The amazing glory of Love is aptly captured in the poem. Your employment of appropriate similes to drive home your conviction is poetically remarkable. Thanks for sharing Herbert.

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Wilma De Guzman 23 August 2016

I like how you describe the love using the pkanets! Very well written!

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Sranisha Francis 12 June 2016

Thanks for sharing this poem with us. Thanks.

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 May 2016

A magnetic kind of force! ! ! With the muse of sweet love. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Josephine Tribiana 17 April 2016

Wow!

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Shahin Latif 28 November 2015

Nice work. Thanks a lot.

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Sofia Kioroglou 09 October 2015

Beautiful and lyrical!

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Paul Elenora 18 September 2015

Beautiful.

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Ramesh Rai 02 July 2015

Lovely write like the rainbow sucks all pains. Thanks for sharing +10.

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Naial Oniblab 13 June 2015

Poem filled with love, , , , love that every person in the world would wish for. Thank you for sharing.

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Laurence Ruedas 12 June 2015

Very interesting poem. I can feel the love while reading this.

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Allotey Abossey 29 May 2015

Love presented in a biut'ful form. God bless you

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Chinedu Dike 27 May 2015

Beautifully and elegantly written love poem. The use of planetary bodies to adopt metaphoric piece of lines is indeed poetically remarkable. A lovely poem insightfully penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. ➕10

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Benjamin Age 17 May 2015

I see you like a Venus because of your unsurpassed beauty, , my best line in the poem, & i lov all ur poems Rose Gardner

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Dave Walker 14 May 2015

A beautifully put poem, a great play on words.

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Hazel Durham 11 May 2015

Very entertaining and original love poem and so beautifully expressed, a gem!

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 11 May 2015

No one has ever thought of the way you described and compared love very different. Mabuhay

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Henry Garcia 08 May 2015

Highly creative thoughts. Very interesting to read

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Kim Barney 29 March 2015

Interesting concept, comparing love to planets. I never would have thought of that. Enjoyed reading it.

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