Friday, October 26, 2007

Your Love In Vain Comments

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a tear falls down the side of my face,
my pain revolves at a steady pace,
you left me to die to wilt in the rain,
all those words you said in vain,
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Kayla Corinne Beneteau
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Ninja Kitten 14 November 2007

its a nice poem, expression sad and lost. i know how you feel.

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Uloia Norris Moore 26 October 2007

A very nice poem expression in thought. Thank you

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