Your "Love", Huh? ….Ridiculous! …[ Bri's Response To Lora Colon's " Love " Poem: " Together…..My Love And I " ] Comments
It's tough for me, Lora, [ you sound HAPPY ],
to find myself making you now feel ‘crappy',
but, because I DO care, I tell you, I SWEAR,
your "Love" had best [NOW! ] go...elsewhere.
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Ha ha. i just acknowledged receipt of Kumarmani's and Aniruddha's comments. AND i noticed that " Rediculous" was misspelled, which i plan to correct SOON! It should be spelled " Ridiculous" ... Ain't it ridiculous? bri :)
An angel showing way on the eve of closing year, showing new hope for the coming new year at the rear, And in way only Bri can What else, with his poetic pen.
But don't worry; I've got ‘it' under control, I DO! You'll NEVER see him again; I promise.It's TRUE......touching concluding with an insightful solace. A beautiful poem on love, life and deceit is stunningly delineated.10
Most of Lora's fine poems deal with love and lovers OR a lack or loss of love/lovers. bri ;) to MyPoemList
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8/3/2025 11:29:44 AM # 1.0.0
I've always learned that the time to start worrying is when someone reassures, " Don't worry." That last 2-line stanza is priceless....so open to interpretation... Awesome, Bri!