You have been like water on me.
Smoothing the rough places.
You have been like a Banyan tree over me.
That always gives me cool Shade.
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This is a splendid poem. You are excellent with words. Thank you for your beauty.
do not take words comments as true some lagaoing makan only so edit your poem u have lovely thoughts though ENGLISH is not thought of so edit is a must in order to progress you are a young poet upcoming yes