Friday, May 4, 2018

Your Love Have No Limits Comments

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You have been like water on me.
Smoothing the rough places.
You have been like a Banyan tree over me.
That always gives me cool Shade.
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Raj Swami
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 09 June 2018

do not take words comments as true some lagaoing makan only so edit your poem u have lovely thoughts though ENGLISH is not thought of so edit is a must in order to progress you are a young poet upcoming yes

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Jean Larson 04 May 2018

This is a splendid poem. You are excellent with words. Thank you for your beauty.

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Raj Swami 05 May 2018

Thank you ji

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Bernard F. Asuncion 04 May 2018

Dear Raj, such a fine allegory👍👍👍

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Raj Swami 05 May 2018

Thank you Your comment giving me hope for writing

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