Saturday, July 3, 2010

Your Love: All I Need Comments

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Can You hold my hand today
Time has not been good off late
Troubled waters; Life is in a mess
Broken I am, in a total distress...
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Rohit Sharma
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Rinki Nandy 06 July 2010

enjoyed reading it....b'fully rhymed...i hope you get your girl back.

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Anita Trivedi 05 July 2010

You have so much of love in your heart........ Your this poem is also beautiful, a very much truth..... And each an every words and lines are properly placed........... Great job buddy......... You are really a great writter........ God bless

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Alicia Moore 04 July 2010

: ] Beautiful as always ur poems never get old... i hope u find her Rohit i really do: ]

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Lady Grace 04 July 2010

love is powerful..it strengthen the weak...good write...

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Nazma Lucky 04 July 2010

We may look tough, but we're weaker from within yes, absolutly right, men are strong physically, , , , , but they lose their all strength at one place, , , , they are broken, helpless at one point

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Unwritten Soul 03 July 2010

Another 'romantico' poem from u, well what more can i say other than woah! it is so true... This poem will please everyone who read it...Each line simply attached to the vibes of feeling..and the rhythms, perfect! the theme of 'amore' is already mastered by u! keep the great work.......

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Aastha Uppal 03 July 2010

the importance and support of love in ones life very much evident.. also asking for a second chance.explaining and taking all the blame for the previous mistakes is very well potrayed.. but probably true love doesn't need explanations and no second chances.. its a lifetime treasure nice write

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Aastha Uppal 03 July 2010

the importance and support of love in ones life very much evident.. also asking for a second chance.explaining and taking all the blame for the previous mistakes is very well potrayed.. but probably true love doesn't need explanations and no second chances.. its a lifetime treasure nice write

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Lifes distractions can shift our focus and what matters most becomes unseen. You portrayed that well in this poem. Well done; D

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Sally Plumb Plumb 03 July 2010

I'm sure you've a lot of support.

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