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a magnificent poem... how many of us have tried to change ourselves for those whose love is conditional

'Bound by blood I slave for your conditional love I shape my being to your image Painfully cutting away The parts of me, That is not you But me' is a magnificent stanza in a wonderful poem

very powerful poem, revealing! good job!

IT IS REALLY GOOD....I LIKE THIS......Y ou hurt me with your silence...THIS LINE IS MOST BEUTIFULL, YOU ARE VERY CORRECT SILENCE OF OF DEAREST ONE IS MORE PAINFUL THAN THAT OF ANYTHING

beautiful poem, , well penned and emotional...thanks for sharing..

Deep and emotional. It's like I can feel the intensity. It's great!

It's a good poem, , , I like it very much! ! ! Top marks! ! !