Tuesday, March 4, 2008

Your Love Comments

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Shivering in your arms
I’m slowly falling apart
While the night goes on
I begin to fade away
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Allyson Gordon
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Michael Neguse 04 March 2008

I like this poem, you showed ups and down of love. It is good, keep up the good work. I know I am a poet also. Check out my poems when you get the chance.

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Allyson Gordon

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