Tuesday, November 22, 2011

Your Love Comments

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Your love
will be awaken
my unconscious mind,
by a soft wind,
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VIPINS PUTHOORAN
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Harindhar Reddy 09 February 2012

Nice rhythm and very sweet poem like cherry. This poem has become my cup of tea for its lucidity! Brilliant work dear poet!

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Poem Guy 23 December 2011

nice rhythm and use of wind/breeze analogy. The ending but, that breeze-always I may miss is not clear to me.

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Unwritten Soul 25 November 2011

No big words to tell big things, even in simple one the biggest can come in....like you write it so simple, smooth and sweet...and it's rare..that was priceless love to read here :) _Unwritten Soul

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Jacqui Broad 23 November 2011

This is so beautiful, Vipins! I could feel the breeze of love I'm missing. You have a great way with words.

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Dave Walker 22 November 2011

Really like it. Short and sweet. Really good write.

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