Your love
will be awaken
my unconscious mind,
by a soft wind,
...
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nice rhythm and use of wind/breeze analogy. The ending but, that breeze-always I may miss is not clear to me.
No big words to tell big things, even in simple one the biggest can come in....like you write it so simple, smooth and sweet...and it's rare..that was priceless love to read here :) _Unwritten Soul
This is so beautiful, Vipins! I could feel the breeze of love I'm missing. You have a great way with words.
Nice rhythm and very sweet poem like cherry. This poem has become my cup of tea for its lucidity! Brilliant work dear poet!