Im sitting here looking at this old flower,
It's been about a half an hour.
Seeing you, No longer makes me blue.
I now see how the time has flew.
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nice work..the way you rhyme the words is really good. keep writing and bring out the best in you.
BEAUTIFUL poem chick...I liked it a lot, I gave me something to think about. :) BESTFRIEND :)
a good poem, indeed, but no feelings of ''LOVE'' here.. love has just finished, for both of the two (ex) lovers.. We are humans, we all (almost all..?) have experienced such disappointment and reacted the same way..