Monday, September 1, 2014

Your Look Is Humankind Comments

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We are within a shield of heaven, from bang
Why because, we are safe from cosmic pang,
We have made this earth our own universe,
And created disastrous weapons, so adverse,
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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 01 September 2014

I likes this beautiful lines of poem in its own spirit and values which is much important on humanity and against war and weapons which destroys the human life entitled to live in its full time that envisioned by destiny. But unfortunately the things are not its favor in the present juncture. A socially relevant poem the poet expressed the feelings in right spirit.

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Geetha Jayakumar 01 September 2014

Beautiful poem on Humankind. Beautiful lines..... Live and let live others, this is the life brothers Very true said in few lines... weapons are built by human mind, What we have learnt from Holy Books? . I loved reading it. Thanks for sharing.

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