Wednesday, August 20, 2008

Your Little Things Comments

Rating: 5.0

I love the custard on your lips
sweet jam on your finger tips
I love the small buttons on your shirt
the way u smell of mud and dirt
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Reshma Ramesh
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its pure music! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Thad Wilk 10 November 2008

A most beautiful poem Reshma! No one can take these memories of 'those little things'! ! Best wishes! ! *10*! ! Friend Thad

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 19 October 2008

I love the poem the way you have writeen

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Dr.Wardha Jawdat 26 September 2008

deeeeeeeeeeeeeelightfulllllllllllll............hahahaha.....loved reading this reshma..its tremendously endearing.10!

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Kelly Curiel-bowser 26 August 2008

this poem is soo sweet the true essence of father hood.

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Subbaraman N V 25 August 2008

What a fine expression of the appreciation of each and every aspect of 'the small'!

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Reshma Ramesh

Reshma Ramesh

Bangalore, India
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