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And by such freedom of choice, You navigate. Thus, you become captain Of your own fate.oh yes there you are my lovely poetess, oh what a introspective write, as we individually are masters of gods within and maker of destiny, and govern our own fate to walk along great journey, most uplifting write,

It matters not how straight the gate, how charged with punishment the scroll, I am the master of my fate, I am the captain of my soul - your poem epitomizes these famous lines. Excellent write.

our life is just like a story in a story book. We decide what to do with our life just like a captain of a ship or plane. Well written poem.

I agree with all your phrases... our life is a story...and every day with new weep new shout new laugh And sometimes new grace Then why people love to read stories More than poems...! ! ! Your words worth more than 10...

You are given the power To determine your fate, And by such freedom of choice, You navigate. Thus, you become captain Of your own fate. well said. xlent. top marks.

Now hold on their Sally, I had to start a mutiny and steal a ship to be Captain, and my fate will be the gallows. If I had only read your poem sooner. Richly penned!

Soo true, alley, we are the captains. We do have the choice Often the easy path looks so easy but becomes difficult soon after for very long (e.g. giving in to alcohol, drugs, taking money, ....) Often the path of God looks difficult initially but becomes so easy for so long soon afterwards (saying no to things your friends do, helping a class mate who is being ridiculed, ....) I hope many people read this poem, including our teenagers. Very well done

Frost said the road not taken made all the difference.A profound write, showing wisdom beyond your years.You are a thinker