Friday, September 7, 2012

Your Life Is A Dream Comments

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Your life is a dream, a miraculous scene
of Porsches and portable phones.
Your face is unblemished,
a lightly-tanned structure
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Hugh Fraser
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Indranil Bhaduri 28 September 2012

A poem that may depict the inner thoughts of a large number of people in this world. Excellent write!

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Isam Hussain 22 September 2012

I like it. Keep on writing; it is very therapeutic and enlightens the soul. Isam Hussain

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Kemi Kemms 18 September 2012

humorous and honest, I like it! marvelous.. :)

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Nader Baheri 07 September 2012

wonderful. I really appreciate this poem.I love part three.In our language we we have an expression(these friends you see, they are just mosquitos around the cookie) .this part really reflects thie expression. tnx cheers Nader

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Leslie Philibert 07 September 2012

I like this, British humour with a serious background

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