Your Lies Comments

A very deep write with deep thought envisaging the truth of life.

An interesting albeit angry poem!

Great! I have spent many an hour with a good drink just sitting in a chair thinking of the many ways to kill someone I loved.......LOL.

Yes I see all your blood being splatered in the park Where people walked Yes I an not ashame To tell any one that you finally died There is something that I didn't think about before Now that you are dead I don't have to listen to your horrible lies You thought that you would impress me by telling lies This is what is missing in that poem I added it, I hope you don't mind