Sunday, August 3, 2008

Your Letters Comments

Rating: 3.5

Thank you for your letters
They get me through these days
I'll read them more than once, usually everyday
I read them till im tired or my eyes start not to see
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Joe Doti
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Greenwolfe 1962 03 August 2008

This comes out as a rhymed poem which forces me to use a higher standard. As a result, I cannot recomend this poem. The rhyming doesn't flow very well throughout. This actually distracted me from the poem. It was a heartfelt poem, it just didn't come out that well. GW62

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