Your Laughter / हँसी तुम्हारी (Hindi) Comments

good writers all of you because I don't know how to write a poem

2 Na lena Gulab ka phool aur jungli peela phool jo tum ne toDa tha na hi paani jo phanware main hans uthta hai ya vo chaandi jaisi lehar jo tum main uth aati hai

chaho to le lo mera khana pani bund kar do mere saans lakin tumhari hansi rehne do mere pass

when your laughter enters it rises to the sky seeking me I want your laughter like the flower I was waiting for, deny me everything but not your laughter. innocent expressions of love, longing, desire..... very nice poem full of emotions that well up from the heart...... thanku dear Rajnish.. i could not understand your hindi.. so i read only the english part of it...... thank u again.

Your Laughter, may be excellent poem, I cannot read Hindi, if you would add English Translation, would be easy for us, thank you for sharing the poem with us

An amazing translation that sustains all the charms of the original poem. A great work by Rajnish Managa

I have not read Neruda's poem, but your rendition of the poem in hindi is really enjoyable in its own right. Enjoyed reading it.

laajawab! thanks for sharing!

Kya baat hai Maza aa gaya padhkar...Aapne is kavita mein hindi ki Jaan daal di Rajnishji....Ati uttam.