Saturday, October 18, 2014

Your Kisses Inflame My Thoughts Comments

Rating: 5.0

You'd like us to talk, well it's banal.
Your kisses inflame my thoughts,
like a war correspondent's journal
all they do is lead to more pot-shots
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Mark Heathcote
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Akhtar Jawad 24 August 2015

Haven't I already given my life, entire? A question but in fact an answer, It's nice................................10

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Heather Wilkins 30 October 2014

lovvely poem well written enjoyed the read

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Hazel Durham 19 October 2014

Great, original write that explodes with lines that shoot from the hip! Superb write!

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Mihaela Pirjol 19 October 2014

Beautifully written poem. Lovely rhyme scheme.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 18 October 2014

.i felt like reading after a long time ...Patriotic poem as from the last line, , , love to motherland that is kisses, yet the title is catchy and wonderfully chosen thanks for title and rest poem is poetical amazement i love and rate to it s max thank you..

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Gajanan Mishra 18 October 2014

very fine, I like it, thanks.

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