Monday, January 9, 2006

Your Kiss Comments

Rating: 4.8

your kiss is like a sensual droplet of fresh rain
chersihing the petals of a flower
or a fairy dancing inside of the graciousness of temptation
May I always be blessed with the capacity
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Eila Mahima Jaipaul
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Exquisitely worded, arousing

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" magical colored kisses."… nice. Good poem. Enjoyed

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Peter Lebuhn 12 February 2006

HMMMMMMMMMMMM Eila....HMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM I am left speechless You have me wanting more I love the pastoral sound of this one Peter

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Charley60 K 09 January 2006

Very well described and written.........good.

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