Monday, April 2, 2007

Your Kiss Comments

Rating: 5.0

I can feel your magical touch,
when you kiss me,
I can feel your kiss,
With every bliss,
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Amanda Bristow
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Castellenas John 18 March 2019

Perfect description for the kiss. A amazing poem.

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Doran Ellis 03 June 2017

wow, well thought out poem and beautiful

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Rishikesh Prajapati 29 January 2017

A very nice piece of writing

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Jovahna Davis 03 June 2009

i can relate to what u say really touch me

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Ben Gieske 05 April 2007

'Although it scared me a tone' - quite original

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Amanda>>>Nice work, here, indeed...Mellifluous stanzaec movement///smooth & tight...Good storyline...Solid Crafting. ~ F.j.R. ~

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Aldo Kraas 02 April 2007

This poem is excelent

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Amanda Bristow

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