Sunday, October 28, 2018

Your Journey Comments

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I see the darkness
In your eyes
You say it hurts too much
To even cry
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Ray Hansell
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Bernard F. Asuncion 28 October 2018

Ray, such a splendid poem...................10++++++++++++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 October 2018

Observing the darkness in eyes we still feel the presence of light that guides life for a better journey. An excellent poem is well penned.10

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