Thursday, September 18, 2008

Your Imagination Comments

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Follow the wonderful dream that you’re making,
Hang on to the vision as dawn is breaking,
A fantasy of your very own making,
is a glorious story told.
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Marilyn Lott 26 September 2013

Hello, Ernestine. Love your poem with its generous rhyming style and uplifting message. Very nice!

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David Threadgold 18 September 2008

Hi Ernestine. Another piece that flows so well. Thanks for the read regards Dave T

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Meggie Gultiano 18 September 2008

a lovely write..your words flows gently. wonderful piece. Love, Meggie

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An excellently crafted series of imperatives, E.... so much more engaging than the tired old expression 'carpe diem'. t x

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Kris Smith 18 September 2008

A true ldy of the purest verse an inspiration to us all 10 Chris x

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David Taylor 18 September 2008

Inspirational Ernestine, just that. David

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