Follow the wonderful dream that you’re making,
Hang on to the vision as dawn is breaking,
A fantasy of your very own making,
is a glorious story told.
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Hi Ernestine. Another piece that flows so well. Thanks for the read regards Dave T
a lovely write..your words flows gently. wonderful piece. Love, Meggie
An excellently crafted series of imperatives, E.... so much more engaging than the tired old expression 'carpe diem'. t x
A true ldy of the purest verse an inspiration to us all 10 Chris x
Hello, Ernestine. Love your poem with its generous rhyming style and uplifting message. Very nice!