Friday, August 30, 2019

Your Hug Or A Passing Dream Comments

Rating: 5.0

The parting hug of yours this morn
Ere you tore ‘way from me at dawn,
Looked as if I was lost in dream,
Flustered, I broke some sweat cold
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 30 August 2019

A VERY Brilliant poem... REALLY captivating POETRY. Mesmerizing WORDS POET ME HAS EVER HEARD KEEP at it O poet FRIEND You will reach the farthest end While most of us slip off the next bend .. DEAREST AP

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Aniruddha Pathak 31 August 2019

O come on PP, it's your modesty if you say 'while most of us slip...'. And who knows, 'the farthest end' could be edge of precipice from where you only can fall. But thanks, good words are good words. Period.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 August 2019

The parting hug of yours this morn Ere you tore ‘way from me at dawn, Looked as if I was lost in dream, Flustered, I broke some sweat cold But it did to me so seem: .......fantastic beginning with haunting expression. Brilliant poem is amazingly shared.10

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Aniruddha Pathak 31 August 2019

Thank you Kumarmaniji for appreciating the poem, and with such good words.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 30 August 2019

Mesmerizing poem, you conjured magic in this amazing write. A 10 full score and much much more! I have enjoyed this so beautifully composed stanzas with best lovely end rhymes.

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Aniruddha Pathak 31 August 2019

Thank you so much dear poet. If you, a good poet yourself, says so I accept with humility if the poem has come out so well. Yet however this is not generally my genre.

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