Thursday, November 20, 2008

Your Hold Comments

Rating: 5.0

In this chilly rain
I want a place to go
Place where I can find the warmth
Place where I feel safe
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Little Red Apple
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Kesav Easwaran 09 December 2008

last stanza lines...sweet and inviting...reading this, no doubt he would yield... nice talking piece...10

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Fiona Davidson 20 November 2008

Beautifully written piece...really shows me a picture of your search...there's always a safe place if only we know where to...thank you

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