Sunday, May 1, 2011

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Have you been searching all of your life in vain
Knowing that somethings missing
There is information out there with so much to gain
Though finding healing light is not for power or money
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 01 May 2011

Nice poem having great sentiments. Beautifully written Loved to read. Thanks for sharing..... Please read my new poems on page 1&2.

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Martin Lochner 01 May 2011

great contents here and like your proposal but you are telling us and not showing us.... use metaphor or imagism to show us! Martin

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