Saturday, June 2, 2018

Your Heart Is Not Alone Comments

Rating: 5.0

Broken, your heart is not alone
You kept loneliness well-hidden
While comfort now must be your own
Your desires are not bed-ridden
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Chris Embrick
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Lodigiana Poetess 02 June 2018

Hi Chris, oh my a Pantoum! ! I think it's sometimes hard enough to just give flowing meaning to a freestyle poem but when you have the repeated pattern of a Pantoum that makes it particularly challenging..but nonetheless you succeeded! A lovely piece that benefits exactly from the repeats to express the love and gentleness running through this piece! ...+10

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Chris Embrick 12 June 2018

Yes indeed, Pantoums can be a little challenge to write. Thank you for your kind remarks.

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