Tuesday, February 17, 2009

Your Heart And Mine Comments

Rating: ★5.0

Your heart and mine
Two halves of a pumpkin
Let them be red forever
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Prem Narayan Nath
forever pearls
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Catrina Heart 17 February 2009

Nice poetic expression of love, great similes used...just wondering about your second stanza why you used henna- hued wherein it represents fading colour...an oxymoron of concealed under the leaves forever....though still i gave you ten.

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Prem Narayan Nath

Prem Narayan Nath

Jamuguri, Nagaon, Assam
Prem Narayan Nath
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Jamuguri, Nagaon, Assam
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