Monday, September 21, 2015

Your Happy Hips Comments

Rating: 5.0

I love your hips.
I love the way, they sway-
making my heart cheer
and dance your rhythm.
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Arun Maji
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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 December 2015

Love with rhythm makes heart beautiful and thoughts shine with this wonderful love across the street, dream or life. Very wisely expressed thoughtful poem shared here. Fantastic.10

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Rajnish Manga 09 December 2015

I am sure only a poet who has imbibed the spirit of Bhavbhuti's treatise known as ''Shringar Shatak' can bring about such a sophisticated expression about her beloved's hips. Thanks, Arun. bubbly as your heart and soft as your soul. while my soul plays the flute.

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M Asim Nehal 05 November 2015

The metaphor HIPS is unbelievable in your poem, the source of energy may emerge from anything created by Almighty is the essence of your nicely composed poetry. The happiness seen by individual during different stages of life indeed differs and during adolescence stage it may find happiness in love and beloved's body parts....10+++

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