Monday, February 15, 2010

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why are there feelings in me
what is the way to be

what and when to express I know not how
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Asim Burman
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Lynn Glover 17 February 2010

A very fine write and again I mention the rhythm and the rhyming involved in your work. It is nice to see the realness of your words being put to rhythmic sound of your poetry. Keep up the good work. Lynn

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