The night is beginning to fall.
Somewhere in the distance a
train whistle calls. Searching the
sky for the man in the moon, but
...
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Liked the closure lines. Great faith could always gives us hope in life. Very uplifting message. Top Marks!
A very moving spiritual write A poem that gives hope and peace. Great images and heartfelt poetic expressions.
YOUR HAND must be chosen as The Poem Of The Day! Hooray! My greatest CONGRATS for you and your poem! God Blesses YOU, dear friend Becca!
The final of this great poem is the greatest, I cite your last line: But something tells me it'll be alright.. WOW! These words are still echoing in my ears, beating my heart faster, such intense words! They are uttered straight from your heart. Greatest poem this be, dear Becca!
Amazing graphic, a brilliant choice! TOP Marks 5 Full Stars for this precious important poem. I enjoyed tremendously.
Perfect and brilliant! Thank you for this touching poem!