Sunday, August 13, 2023

Your Glowing Longing Kiss Comments

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KISSES FROM YOU AWAKE THE ANIMAL WILD PASSION
in the reeds of sensuality, your arousing body lures with relish
KISSES FROM YOU - BRING ME TO MY MIND HE RELEASES PURE HORNY
in the reeds of sensuality, your arousing body lures with relish
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Weisshuhn Johannes
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Bri Edwards 18 August 2023

I DID read your complete Poet's Notes; thanks for that. Aren't you TIRED from all that kissing? ? ? ? AND..you use a LOT OF 'relish'. Are there hotdogs and/or hamburgers to go with it (the relish) ? ? ? ;) bri

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Bri Edwards 18 August 2023

I read SOME (not much) OF your poem, 'new-to-PH poet'. Does THIS make sense to YOU? : (in line 3) 'BRING ME TO MY MIND HE RELEASES'? ? ? Really?

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