The sound of footsteps
Echoed round the wall
The love's death
Cast blight on my all
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i love the lines 'the love's death cast blight on my all' it speaks volumes about the impact of lost love good job =)
it's amazing how bright the light when seen through desire's eyes...lovely write
years of being left out..... excellent poem. a 10. eid mubarak.
You always write such beautiful poetry, if I looked into your heart I would see love and kindness and a wonderful human being, 10 Lynda xx
oh so sweet! ! ! ! flashlight beams and your glance. ++++10 as always regards anjali
Ah, She'll be back with her special glance, to give you another chance - at this romance! Great read Shiraz! ! *10*! ! Friend Thad
Very nice! ! This poem is wonderful! ! please continue to inform me when you write more.... I love your writings! ! ! ! ! ! !
Very Nice. The poem hints at fraility, perhaps man's nature in such a state: love?
The glance of death.........when your in deep love, is what they used to call......nice work bro.
When a man is touched by love, uncontrollable light clears the heart, pure love holds a man...changing his personality relentlessly. a 10.
I gave you ten very mysteriously perceptive.
Just one glance from God can change our lives and hearts. All we have to do is believe~ Patricia~
...touchyyyyy and lovelyyyyy dear nightingle of shiraz.......10++
A beautiful poem, last stanza is nice.