Thursday, September 25, 2008

Your Glance Comments

Rating: 5.0

The sound of footsteps
Echoed round the wall
The love's death
Cast blight on my all
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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE
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Ashraful Musaddeq 09 October 2008

A beautiful poem, last stanza is nice.

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Mencita Monoï Angel Carmen 08 October 2008

a bautiful glance....

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Jessica Rosalie Smith 04 October 2008

i love the lines 'the love's death cast blight on my all' it speaks volumes about the impact of lost love good job =)

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Vilma Xelin 30 September 2008

very sublime.... I love it!

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Viola Grey 28 September 2008

it's amazing how bright the light when seen through desire's eyes...lovely write

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anne adam 27 September 2008

i love this lovely poem it's so ture i love it

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Seema Chowdhury 27 September 2008

years of being left out..... excellent poem. a 10. eid mubarak.

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Lynda Robson 26 September 2008

You always write such beautiful poetry, if I looked into your heart I would see love and kindness and a wonderful human being, 10 Lynda xx

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Anjali Sinha 26 September 2008

oh so sweet! ! ! ! flashlight beams and your glance. ++++10 as always regards anjali

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Koyel Mitra 25 September 2008

A lovely poem.Love can clear the blight in mind.A 10!

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Thad Wilk 25 September 2008

Ah, She'll be back with her special glance, to give you another chance - at this romance! Great read Shiraz! ! *10*! ! Friend Thad

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Samantha Williams 25 September 2008

Very nice! ! This poem is wonderful! ! please continue to inform me when you write more.... I love your writings! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Chelsea Brink 25 September 2008

Very Nice. The poem hints at fraility, perhaps man's nature in such a state: love?

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 25 September 2008

The glance of death.........when your in deep love, is what they used to call......nice work bro.

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C T Heart 25 September 2008

When a man is touched by love, uncontrollable light clears the heart, pure love holds a man...changing his personality relentlessly. a 10.

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I gave you ten very mysteriously perceptive.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 25 September 2008

Wonderful poem, love the last stanza most.10++

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Emo Seb 25 September 2008

nice write............

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Patricia Bankhead 25 September 2008

Just one glance from God can change our lives and hearts. All we have to do is believe~ Patricia~

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Sarwar Chowdhury 25 September 2008

...touchyyyyy and lovelyyyyy dear nightingle of shiraz.......10++

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