Monday, December 3, 2018

Your Gaze Comments

Rating: 5.0

Transfixed...

by the hypnotic laser
of your gaze,
...
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Mihaela Pirjol
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M Asim Nehal 05 December 2018

To my favourite list......

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M Asim Nehal 05 December 2018

Outstanding poem. Your last stanza took it to a different level.10++++ I am solid again — heavy as a stone: grounded, rational, awkwardly rebalancing the terrestrial gravitation.

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 December 2018

.... and feel everything! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kostas Lagos 04 December 2018

Bravo Mihaela! Splendid poem!

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Valsa George 03 December 2018

Sometimes a gaze can be so powerful that it will grab one into its gravitational pull and one may feel levitating! Beautiful poem! A 10

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