Sunday, January 29, 2017

Your Freedom Comments

Rating: 4.5

You, to desperately fill
my solitude, to feed me with
your laugh, to touch me where
the shadows clung to my soul,
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A Waltz For Zizi
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Jazib Kamalvi 14 October 2017

A refined poetic imagination, A Waltz. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Ben Paynter 02 February 2017

My wish was my mistake, your writing is really progressing, more command of words and thought, less whimsical. Really enjoyed this write. Keep on. bp

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A Waltz For Zizi 03 February 2017

Thank you! But how do I do that?

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