Thursday, August 11, 2005

Your Four Tires Comments

Rating: 4.9

You have made me so very fierce,
So your car tires, I now will pierce;

To find you car then, yes I must
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Tony Avila Sampson
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Poetry Hound 11 August 2005

This is very funny. The subject matter is certainly original. I like how it has fun with the banality of forced rhyming. The poem seems to admit that ryhming is dumb and yet goes ahead and does it anyway, searching for every possible couplet to say basically the same thing. Rhyming seems to work best with comedy.

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Tony Avila Sampson

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