Friday, April 1, 2011

Your Fingers Comments

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when i kissed your palm
i was afraid if injured
then kiss made me calm
but when i kissed your thumb
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ahmed abomahfouz
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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 27 February 2014

Again a great imagery...........Ahmed.............how love shines on respective fingers, the feelings of which very delicately conveyed.........superb.....

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Binish Cd 17 January 2012

very nice imagination.........an interesting poem to read............good work.

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Rafiq Sandeelvi 17 July 2011

Close observation of her every finger with soft touch and feel but reader can not see your fingers who are touching and feeling.You have depicted her hand without thinking her body.....nice poem

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