when i kissed your palm
i was afraid if injured
then kiss made me calm
but when i kissed your thumb
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very nice imagination.........an interesting poem to read............good work.
Close observation of her every finger with soft touch and feel but reader can not see your fingers who are touching and feeling.You have depicted her hand without thinking her body.....nice poem
Again a great imagery...........Ahmed.............how love shines on respective fingers, the feelings of which very delicately conveyed.........superb.....