Friday, July 10, 2009

Your Favorite Place To Be..In Front Of The Tv Comments

Rating: 5.0

i stand before...you
as you ignore.....me
laying on the sofa, just watching t.v.
alone on the couch, as usual
...
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krissi b'williams
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Obinna Eruchie 10 October 2009

He seems much more glued to the set than he is to you.

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Allan Macli Borges 11 July 2009

it's a piece to follow in the mind... the scenes are set as in play. very good work

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Poetic Soul 11 July 2009

Nice poem, it's a different poem in a way.10

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 10 July 2009

A dilemma of modern life inventions which has resulted in parting the humen souls by ignoring each others presence. An episode played almost in every house. A nice piece of writing, Krissi. Best Wishes Naseer

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