Your Fall Into Temptation Comments

its well written and it flows smoothly i love it, i think we all have been there before

This poem develops nicely, saving it's best line for the end... well done, Amber! Brian

A great poem about possibly a misinterpeted lover's love or a jilted lover hurt real bad in a relationship. Very good. I gave it a ten. God bless all poets-MJG.

Great poem Amber. It's soild and 'before the love rushed by' is a wonderful line. Your work is just too good ~Amber~