They say paradise is only in heaven
But they haven't seen your face like I have.
They haven't been greeted by your smile
and embraced by your words.
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" So wise like king Solomon himself Who chose wisdom over all riches of the earth." An amazing poem. Congrats on poem of the Day.
A bit wordy but well written. Congratulations are in order for having this chosen as member poem of the day!
That is a beautiful composition full of nice simile. Congrats on poem of day!
I love this poem. However, I did get a laugh at the part, " Your forehead is so elementary." Great stuff, and congrats' on the poem being chosen as 'POD.
Embraced by your words! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
I love the way the powerful religious imagery illuminates this poem about love Mitta...well done! ! ! !
the love holy love made journey one soul to another soul one place to another place one era to another era and still alive......//
Your perfect hairline reflects the number of years you have loved me like a bible story told year after year indeed. They say paradise is only in heaven; I have seen paradise in your face.....so touching and impressive. Beautiful poem o n love is nicely executed..
Your eye sockets are full of life. So wise like King Solomon himself, who chose wisdom over all riches of the earth. Your perfect hairline reflects the number of years you have loved me beautiful love reflected here great 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++
An epic poem of the day. Congrats, dear Ma’am Mitta on winning the accolade...10++++
Wow. Thanks, everyone, for the kind words. Thanks to PoemHunter for this as well. Let's keep writing :)