Saturday, January 17, 2015

Your Face Is Paradise Comments

Rating: 4.1

They say paradise is only in heaven
But they haven't seen your face like I have.
They haven't been greeted by your smile
and embraced by your words.
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Mitta Xinindlu
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Mitta Xinindlu 20 August 2019

Wow. Thanks, everyone, for the kind words. Thanks to PoemHunter for this as well. Let's keep writing :)

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Ratnakar Mandlik 23 July 2019

" So wise like king Solomon himself Who chose wisdom over all riches of the earth." An amazing poem. Congrats on poem of the Day.

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Lyn Paul 23 July 2019

Your words reflect true love. Very original and quite beautiful.

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Kim Barney 23 July 2019

A bit wordy but well written. Congratulations are in order for having this chosen as member poem of the day!

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Ruta Mohapatra 23 July 2019

That is a beautiful composition full of nice simile. Congrats on poem of day!

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Bernard Snyder 23 July 2019

I love this poem. However, I did get a laugh at the part, " Your forehead is so elementary." Great stuff, and congrats' on the poem being chosen as 'POD.

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Edward Kofi Louis 23 July 2019

Embraced by your words! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Adrian Flett 23 July 2019

Good comparisons and metaphors building up to the final lines.

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Dominic Windram 23 July 2019

I love the way the powerful religious imagery illuminates this poem about love Mitta...well done! ! ! !

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Mahtab Bangalee 23 July 2019

the love holy love made journey one soul to another soul one place to another place one era to another era and still alive......//

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 July 2019

Your perfect hairline reflects the number of years you have loved me like a bible story told year after year indeed. They say paradise is only in heaven; I have seen paradise in your face.....so touching and impressive. Beautiful poem o n love is nicely executed..

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Adeeb Alfateh 23 July 2019

Your eye sockets are full of life. So wise like King Solomon himself, who chose wisdom over all riches of the earth. Your perfect hairline reflects the number of years you have loved me beautiful love reflected here great 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Bernard F. Asuncion 23 July 2019

An epic poem of the day. Congrats, dear Ma’am Mitta on winning the accolade...10++++

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