Your Face: A Galactic Window Of Happiness Comments

some companies are a bliss....nicely woven tapestery here, the fabric live and colorful..the imagery beyond imagination...a journey worthwhile....

... wonderful thinking...10++

nice work....wonderful.......

The restless heart finds rest in God... thanks for this, keep writing

Dear Bhaswat Again and again you are proving that you are a talent writer. A nice stuff. Regards, Nooruddeen

Hey, Indeed, eloquently well written! I really liked it...Impressive write! ! Well done.. Lots of best wishes, K.Poornima

'i don't know if you have always walked beside me' in that last stanza says it all. th lord has always walked with us.

Interesting piece ....................................

hello sir! ! ! ! ! I felt this poem very much....you know i wish some one will come and make me feel better! ! ! ! 'Then, suddenly you came along First, with your possibility (of being) Then your manifestation May be you were there Beyond my witness sight Perhaps you sat with an accomplished smile Beyond the boundaries of toil At the yonder of human experience of stay, toil and persevere' And the galactic window of happiness'....great expression...in fact i v found few sweet friends now...and i feel they give me life, their sweet smiles and faces filled with joy gives me happiness.... thanks for this one sir! ! ! ! 10+++ regards shan

a piece of art. great

this one was fanastic awww i luv it 10++ i like the endind

this poem kept me entralled all through

Very well writen. I love it. You have a lot of talent.

i agree with them. that was amazing. i love it! ! ! ! !

A beautiful piece with lovely word flow...10/10

i strike a cord with this poem of yours...

nice poem good words 10+++

A well written poem thru the space of time the end sums it up nicely, as the title suggests regards

Sure, in the family life there are few moments of happiness like what is said in the poem.

Beautiful. There's always that one special someone.. who makes you feel that you will never be alone again. You wait for them for what seems like forever, but when they come it was all worth it. Doesn't seem that long at all.