Tuesday, July 4, 2017

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Through your lens the cypress family swallowed me
like a nymph of the woods.
The camera flashed & dismissed from the mind.
I, on the other hand, must practice my absent-
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SEEMA SHARMA
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Jazib Kamalvi 08 October 2017

A refined poetic imagination, Seema S. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Dr Antony Theodore 04 July 2017

nymph of the woods. must practice my absent- mindedness, unloved memory.. closed eyes, in shadow the greeens cracking, matter of perspective.. praising the coarseness, and you love me frome the block way. These are the points which i collected from your poem. Thank you very much for this poem. It shows the brilliance of your mind and intellect. Thank you very very much dear poetess. tony

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