Saturday, October 17, 2015

Your Face Comments

Rating: 5.0

When I am alone with myself,
your face still surfaces
from the heaps of old memories.
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Ajit Das
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Sonali Ganguly 04 May 2016

thanks for sharing this beautiful poem sir....

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Bharati Nayak 04 December 2015

Now, returns in waning days the forgotten alphabet, writing on blank pages a note of regret'- - Lost love finds expression in this beautiful note of regret! - - - - - - - 10

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Ratnakar Mandlik 17 October 2015

Your face still surfaces From the heaps of old memories. The imagery, rhyme and selection of most appropriate words seem to be gifted by the almighty. A touching poem expressing deep sentiments. Thanks for sharing. Enjoyed reading. Ten points.

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Rajnish Manga 17 October 2015

Extremely poignant expression of someone who has suffered a jolt in the form of a painful bereavement. Musical impact of simple yet elegant words can be witnessed from beginning to the end: You spoke in words / not contrived – words locked / in your quivering heart-beats

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Shakil Ahmed 17 October 2015

a beautiful poem, well-penned. your loss of love and regain finds a beautiful expression. thanks for sharing. if you find time please read some of my poems and leave your comments

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Ajit Das 17 October 2015

Thanks for appreciating the poem. I'll definitely read some of your poems

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