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Making absent spring bloom......loved it lovely write

Lovely write making absent spring bloom... Loved it....

Lovely love poem, real nice poetic lines that looped nicely to the next line.

this is such a sweet poem. i like it.

Beautiful poem that reminds me of myself...thank you...

wow, whoever this was written for is lucky. it really tells of the love and feeling without being to mushy. its really sweet.

This is very fine indeed - you have attempted a difficult subject (by that I mean the much overworked theme of intimate relations) and managed to avoid the minefield of cliche and sentimentality that usually accompanies it with a robust but uncomprimising language that seems to come from the very heart. Well done! dsw

I assume anyone could fall in love just reading such sweet words...only the loved person's face could have such a wonderful effect on the one in love... Lilly

that's how one would love to be loved....

Beautiful poem. ...thats all i can say

Such a languid and poignant longing. I would that I could be such a muse. Lovely.

The setting, the tone, the choice of words and imagery, along with the most appealing of muses, enrich this poem, and make it such a gentle pleasure to read! Gently exhilarated is the feel at the end of my read :) A poem true to the English Countryside, and to a fair maiden. I liked this a lot!

This is excellent... I give it a 10

I love the words you chose to express with. Beautiful poem! ~Linda~

you just made love beautiful again..you transported me to where love resides, and made me want to stay-you are that gifted.

yea this is a good poem expressing feelings pretty good

Colin, I found your poem to possess true feeling. Ian