Your Eyes-The Eighth Ocean, (Part 1) Comments

are maar dal diya tune! ! jo bhi teri gf hogi lucky hein bahoth! ! ithni achi poems likthe kese ho tum they r just awsm! !

Good job, nice rhythm and flow. In the 5th line, I think it should be either a lover's heart is crying or a lovely heart is crying. Or maybe putting an hyphen between lover and heart would do. Consult someone on this.

what can I say about you...you are indian version (or avatar whatever you say) of John keats yar: -) your poetry work always brings a smile on my face, you are just amazing. I would suggest you to think about publishing your own poetry book..what you say?