Thursday, July 23, 2009

Your Eyes Comments

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Your eyes

Your eyes are deep
With love and happiness
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Robin Miller
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Melissa Jamison 23 July 2009

i like it but maybe spell out words like 'you'. But it has a nice meaning, please read some of mine. Just type in 'Deal With a Demon', its one of mine :) keep writing just remember puntuation and grammar! good luck!

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