Your Eyes! Comments

Fantastic fascination just with eyes. The object here simply two particular eyes, person is secondary. Eyes are only the object to penetrate. But the whole has been soaked by the poet herself, we the readers only touch her feelings, not the eyes. Eyes have not been personified, but the personal feelings of the poet has it been. Beautiful experiment. Excellent experience of reading a good poem. Regards, 10+ pranab

verry lovely and passionate...beautifully expressed poem ma'm...10

so deep...so dark........ come back.......hoooooooooooo........

'And penetrate my very soul With just your eyes You make me shudder With pleasure yearning for your touch! ' Very lovely poem on your eyes.10+++

a pair of eyes with unconditional love can only make you feel like this.....just true love.... please read my poem ' love'

Very good. This one I understand completely

Some eye's are just like that.